The Apartment

Neil Sani is an interesting character to say the least. On one hand, he's very likable, and on the other, he's so uptight he's comical. At least to me he was. I have read both books now, but I read the second one first. I recommend reading them in order. The author does a good job of detailing everyday life. He writes in a way that's not mundane but keeps you wanting to read more. If there is another Neil book coming, I will be sure to check it out.

This is the story of Neil. He's moving out of his parents' home to live in an apartment. He will face common problems people have living in apartments, like rude neighbors, not always adequate staff, and infestations. What I liked about Neil is that he's very human and flawed. He seemed rather spoiled to me, which made it harder for him to adapt in the real world. The other characters were fairly well developed too. There are no major flaws in the writing. But there really isn't much going on in the story. I never felt very tense. There's no mystery. It's only mildly funny. Most of it is just stuff that happens when you move out on your own. Nothing happens to Neil that's extraordinary. Overall, it's an okay ready. But it's not the type of book I'd recommend to other people. I think this author shows promise, though.

Kosh Ram's "The Apartment" is a delightful story that perfectly captures the journey of seeking independence. In this first volume of "The Neil Series," we follow Neil Sani, a twenty-five-year-old from New Jersey, as he takes the significant step of moving out of his crowded family home. Ram's writing is refreshingly honest and relatable, vividly depicting Neil's life in a bustling household filled with relatives. Neil's interactions with his best friend Mark are engaging and filled with humor, showcasing their deep bond. The portrayal of Neil's conversations with his family about moving out is touching and realistic, adding emotional depth to the narrative. The humorous encounter with the leasing agent Yoon, the exploration of the new apartment, and the challenges Neil faces as he settles in are depicted with anticipation and anxiety that many will relate to. Neil's budding friendship with his neighbor Amanda and the quirky dynamics with Joey add layers of charm and authenticity. The story beautifully captures the liberation and challenges of living alone, blending humor, sincerity, and vulnerability. Kosh Ram has created a relatable and heartwarming tale about finding one's place in the world. This book is a delightful read for anyone who has ever sought to carve out their own space. Highly recommended!

This story strikes a chord with many readers through its relatable narrative. While not overly imaginative or thrilling, it accomplishes its goal effectively. The tale navigates a balance of comedic and dramatic moments, with instances that elicit empathy and investment in the protagonist. In summary, this is a grounded, down-to-earth comedy that follows the journey of an everyday individual seeking self-discovery in the modern world. It's a worthwhile read.

This story offers a relatable portrayal of self-discovery in today's world, blending comedy, drama, and excitement. However, it's weighed down by excessive detail. Despite this, it's a sweet coming-of-age tale with authentic emotion. Overall, it leaves a positive impression and sparks curiosity for more from the author.