In Too Deep

What I liked most about this novel, was discovering a writer who has talent and will grow into an excellent novelist. "In Too Deep" has its faults, mostly its the lack of strong editing; far too many unnecessary errors. Wrong word usage, wrong punctuation ... sentences that ramble and are not crisp, that drift, sometimes for an entire paragraph without a single punctuation. The author uses way too many prepositional phrases to begin his sentences. And then he allows them to ramble sometimes for the entire paragraph. The prose are written for a very young, immature audience, making it difficult for older readers to connect. The best audience for this novel will be late high school, first year college students. All of this said, Hayes has crafted an interesting story. All that is left for this talented writer is to clean up the rough edges. Pay attention to detail. Get a strong editor and understand that good writing is rewriting ... as many times as it takes to get it right. Worth the buy if you are interested in discovering new talent. Would love to read his work five years from now.

As someone who appreciates a deeply psychological mystery, In Too Deep pulled me in from the very first page. The tension builds relentlessly as Kyle's seemingly ordinary college life transforms into a dark and twisted nightmare. The characters are raw and real, and the secret at the heart of Kyle's romance with Sussie left me breathless. It's not just a love story; it’s a journey through deceit, desire, and danger. Every twist kept me on edge, and just when I thought I had it figured out, another layer of suspense unraveled. This book is a haunting rollercoaster that I couldn't put down

In Too Deep is not your typical love story—it's a rollercoaster of emotions, packed with suspense, mystery, and heart-stopping twists that left me hooked from start to finish. Kyle Bennett's journey at Clearwater College starts out as every young adult’s dream: a beautiful campus, new friends, and the thrill of first love. But beneath the surface of this seemingly picturesque college life lies a dark, sinister secret that will shatter everything Kyle holds dear. The chemistry between Kyle and Sussie Bishop feels so real, but when tragedy strikes, their love story spirals into something far more chilling. The psychological tension builds as the story unfolds, keeping you constantly guessing: what is the secret Kyle and Sussie are hiding? And will Kyle be able to keep it buried as his world falls apart around him? The vivid, descriptive writing brings the haunting atmosphere of Clearwater College to life. Each character feels layered, complex, and unpredictable, making the twists all the more shocking. If you love thrillers that delve into the darker sides of love, guilt, and betrayal, this book is for you. In Too Deep will haunt you long after you've turned the final page. Highly recommend for fans of psychological thrillers and dark mysteries!

In Too Deep by C.R. Hayes is a riveting psychological thriller that delves into the dark side of college life. Set at Clearwater College, the story follows Kyle Bennett as his typical college experience turns into a nightmare. What begins as a romance with Sussie Bishop quickly spirals into a world of secrets and danger. Hayes skillfully builds suspense, creating an atmosphere of dread that grips the reader. The twists and turns keep you hooked as Kyle's life unravels. A must-read for fans of dark, psychological thrillers.