
I like the foreshadowing and build up early on. It got be excited for what might be coming with this couple. After this, there was more build up with the setting up between the two. This made it even more exciting, because the couple and the readers doesn't know what to expect. Then the big day arrived. I'd have to say I was a bit let down. The plot accelerated too fast. I wanted some discomfort. There wasn't enough tension and nervousness. Also, the head hopping bugged me. I think staying in one perspective would have been better here. Still, it was sexy. This story has a lot of potential. It could just use a few adjustments.